Poem
She getting ignore me
Her love to me is slowly faded away
I dont want to lose her anymore
its acts as poison in my heart
I just want to love her
I never want to ignore her
but she….
How i’m supposed to do?
Can i try to forget her?
but it makes me crazy as i tried to froget her
She’s my true love
She’s my angel
Beautiful angel which God give to me….
Can someone rated this poem written by me.
October 1, 2007 at 5:43 am
yo…i like your poem,but still you can do best in writing it….but i love it…
October 10, 2007 at 11:00 am
hello… a great poem u got there..i’m speechless..hehe
October 10, 2007 at 11:07 am
thanks silentkiller hope you like it….btw selamat hari raya…n jgn lupa bg ampau…
October 22, 2007 at 3:41 am
if d other hav said it great..wat else can i say..make more poem man, u can do it better. i wait for ur next poem man.k. bye2
October 22, 2007 at 10:29 am
haha..my poem is not good anyway.im just learning how to write it,maybe you like it because all the poem i wrote is bout my life,my own experience, things that i have sam and heard
October 22, 2007 at 10:37 am
sorry wrong words sam- saw